It seems like a reasonable game plan which has decent inevitability
I guess you can get creative with SpellTables block feature to temporarily obscure the view of the other two players in the pod, figuring out a way for you to not see your own top four while your opponent is making piles is going to be interesting
This list is very dependent on big mana, you need to hit five/six/seven mana as soon as possible, and this deck could use some more mana dorks to make sure that happens, especially being in three colors
Use a paper cutter, a straight edge, and a sharp blade to cut out the cards carefully
Purphoros, God of the Forge is another damage dealer in this vein, but is far more specific to token based strategies, with Terror able to slot into many more archetypes and provide meaningful removal to boot
Whites got ample removal to help back up Azorius's gameplan, like Swords to Plowshares and Path to Exile